There is great contrast in this story, and more in a first chapter. Start with a phrase to celebrate. It recreates in a church, a scene of personal introspection and conflicts of contradictions of murmuring people, then it concludes in a home: harassing, cursing and merciful. Set the rhythm of the story and the physical and emotional characteristics of the character ... amazing ... I recommend reading him.
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