Review Detail of Minxs in Behind Their World

Lets see here! First, the writing needs a tune up so that the reader doesn't get caught up in correcting everything. I see that very often in comment section on Webnovel books. It pulls the reader out of the story and causes them to not return. Second, feel that there background and these 'enemies' was glossed over a bit. Specifically focussing on their relationship and how the interact with one another. That is a huge part of this story and needs to be fully explored! Third, the personalities of the main characters need a stronger presence in the writing. This might have to do with the awkward sentence strucuture and grammar though. Lastly, I think the story has a chance to be great. A very interesting plot has already been laid down. Also, the 3 MC's is a unique touch that will help this book stick out from the masses! Keep up the good work, and I hope to see this novel succeed in the future!