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Review Detail of _AiRen_ in We are Each Other's Demon

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First of all thank of for the story author! ( ◜‿◝ )♡ Now, let's talk about the novel in detail. For the readers: If you ask me what this novel is about then I'm sorry you guys need to read on to find out, hehe. okay jokes apart (◕દ◕) The novel has a intensely packed plot line since the beginning which is highly entertaining and you folks will have to grab some popcorn on the go ◖⚆ᴥ⚆◗ The characters are finely crafted and each one will make emotionally attracted (ps not the evil ones) hehe, okay so the mc I'm talking about the mc, the other characters introduced along the course of your read. The author had indeed made them strong, supportive and engaging. The narrative is not stable, that is it goes from first person to third person back and forth, but that is maintained attractively no doubt. If you ask me about the tone, then well it is intense and sad as I have said earlier. I guess there will be happy times in the later chapters... ( ╹▽╹ ) Now, about the grammar check part, these chapters aren't free from typos here and there with some minute grammatical mistakes, but that doesn't in the least takes away from the engaging storyline. Personally, I really have enjoyed throughout and couldn't stop myself from getting emotional (。•́︿•̀。). Good job author, keep up the good work!

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We are Each Other's Demon

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Thank you so much for the honest review!! the shift from first to third-person point of view sure is quite random, I might try to not shift too much on later chapters. lots of typos, I might wanna look back at the earlier chapters. I'm glad you like the story and the characters! if you can feel the emotional moments in my story, it mean I managed to achieve what I want this story to be! I like sad stories lol