This is a really great read! The worldbuilding around the story is really nice, and the plot develops are a good rate, making the story really easy to immerse yourself in and follow. The one thing I would say just as a tip for the author, is to make dramatic parts stand out more. There were a couple of times where I had to do a double take when reading because something very dramatic had happened, but the lack of emphasis made it anticlimactic. Overall, great writing, and a great piece of work from the author!
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