I'm giving 3 stars simply because of the grammar and spelling. The grammar and spelling makes it extremely hard to understand what's going on, maybe try Grammarly or even using auto correct if you use a phone? While I do understand what's going on, it's hard to understand, I also have a feeling you will drop this story like many others who give up, but if you can continue this story and persevere, then props to you, when you improve as a writer and make the story easier to read, I'll update this review! Good Luck!
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