You portray yourself as if this isn't some 5 star work but damn I'm not sure if you're looking at it with rose colored lenses or not! With a bit more polish, better advertising, and more people to reach, your book will be amazing. I loved the way the characters banter with one another, Cael's attitude, and many more. I can say that the world building sounds okay, albeit a few weird details here and there but I am sure that anyone who likes fantasy can enjoy what you put out to an extent. will immerse more later, review too long paper planes needed for conversation
hedgehoghug
Liked by 1 people
LIKENo replies. Be the first!