Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in Loving a Faceless Monster

The story was epic! By reading few chapters of your novel brings down shivers in my spine! Fantastic work! All I can say is that it might be best if you can edit your synposis. Your synopsis is GOOD. However, I know you can make it better and more flowery like the first part of your chapter. There's this thing concealed behind each word, so do your best to bring out the best out of it! I love your work!