Review Detail of MonarchX in The Insurrection of the Inept Hero

Item: The Insurrection of the Inept Hero
Rating: 5

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MonarchXAuthor3yrMonarchX

Shameless Review, I know. I'll give myself a 1 star later but anywaaaaay... Reviews are appreciated no matter what they are, they help me improve my writing Aaaaand that's it... So...

The Insurrection of the Inept Hero

MonarchX

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The_StartersLv1The_Starters

Hello author. I just wanna say this plz don't make a big harem.. it's good that he has few girls who loves but don't make it big. it just makes the story worse.... except that I love the story, keep it up👍👍😁😁

2yr

Samuel_MorrisonLv2Samuel_Morrison

discord?

3yr

MonarchXAuthorMonarchX

Link to discord is at bottom of synopsis Or just click on my profile and the link is also there

Samuel_Morrison:discord?

3yr

Rayoub_skLv13Rayoub_sk

the story is good but you need to work on your writing . ex : i'd = i would , not i had and even with that it doesn t make sense to use had+ present . and there are other things but yeah .

3yr

Rayoub_skLv13Rayoub_sk

like you should say: i moved not i'd move i started not i'd start

Rayoub_sk:the story is good but you need to work on your writing . ex : i'd = i would , not i had and even with that it doesn t make sense to use had+ present . and there are other things but yeah .

3yr

Daoistcxho3fLv2Daoistcxho3f

can you continue the assassins concentration in another world novel?

3yr