Shameless Review, I know. I'll give myself a 1 star later but anywaaaaay... Reviews are appreciated no matter what they are, they help me improve my writing Aaaaand that's it... So...
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LIKERayoub_sk:the story is good but you need to work on your writing . ex : i'd = i would , not i had and even with that it doesn t make sense to use had+ present . and there are other things but yeah .