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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv43yrMel_Aniv

I will be honest, there are few edits and finishing touches that has to be done. You have potential and I know you will still grow along the way. Read more about metaphoric and poetic narrations and you will get some insight about them. Study about sentence flow and sentence sequence. There are many guides on internet. All in all, a very promising work! I gotta say I'm inpressed! With talented author, this novel was in good hands!

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The thing we can't reach

Bk1010

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

BTW, I am from review swap.....please vote my work The Grandmaster's Rebirth tomorrow okay? If you have something to spare............

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O******ww nice for telling me... I'm really thankful:)

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Bk1010
Bk1010AuthorBk1010

Of course i remember and i will check it out. i will leave it in my library for now but when i finish my exams i will check it out

Mel_Aniv:BTW, I am from review swap.....please vote my work The Grandmaster's Rebirth tomorrow okay? If you have something to spare............
3yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Thanks!

Bk1010:Of course i remember and i will check it out. i will leave it in my library for now but when i finish my exams i will check it out
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