Review Detail of proking in Omniscience

After reading so far, I'm guessing that the plot has a dark mystery behind every character's backstory. Also, I actually love the concept that we, readers, will be the judges to determine the character's fate and not the author himself. That's very unique idea to be honest. it's like playing a story based game with choices. There are some grammatical mistakes and vocabulary errors which need to be fixed for a better experience but overall it's really a thrilling adventure so far... I've only read 2 of the prisoner's story yet. but I think the the twists and endings of every character will be something noteworthy to look forward to. good job, author!