Review Detail of amaturewriter in If Buddha Was Evil

for motivation I do like the concept..SI marine and going by the title Ill assume a villainy or evil or atleast chaotic neutral. it interesting. but barely anything to judge so far. suggestion: -give an interesting power. cause its what makes a story. And I suggest using the blackclover magic theme where one power can be used for limitless shit. ex: the mirror magic of that bro con, its OP but the power isnt strong at first glance. something like that. for ex: calm calm no mi? instead of sound, also light, remove light like tousen bankai or the DF allows users to freeze a given area, someshit like that. -Explore the marine workings and system, show what it is, what happens -any plans show working, execution, etc instead of glossing over -Use meta knowledge for advantage, instead of just predicting future. dont follow cannon. -Dont make MC a heroic idiot, or overly friendly. And relationships just build no rush. GL