The story just wasn't executed nicely. The bad grammar doesn't even help, it just worsen it a lot more. The characters stay true to their characters and has a lot to improve. The main problem about this story is that why doesn't he have skills or elemental affinity. According to the first chapter, he and his father had a pretty close relationship. So, which father will leave their son to their own, without any help if he can give him help without problems? How does that 25% increase even help with those low number of stats? I'd rather ask for all elemental affinities than those garbage increase. This is also showing signs of "saving the damsel in distress" cliche. Scarlett isn't showing firm character and she's the first heroine. Imagine having the guts to always reject any guy but having no will to fight back against her cousin. She also has her family's bias but she can't get help? That's just BS. Even an arrogant young master in xianxia is better than her. At least, they have the guts to fight back or scheme even it's idiotic. Scarlett acting cold and ruthless to the outside and looking like an naive and pitiful girl at home is just???? I don't know how does that even make sense.
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Thank you so much for your review. I am new at writing and I am trying my best to improve myself, if you read my first novel then you probably get some idea about my writing π but I apologize for my grammar . I hope you will stick with me And possibly give me suggestions along the way, I know I am asking a lot but any help will be appreciated ...Thank you againπ₯°
