So far with the first two chapters, I can't really tell where the story is going. Since the chapters are short, it's hard to get in the story's atmosphere. I want to suggest that for each chapter, you write an average word count of 1.5k. Otherwise, I think the story has potential! Definitely will be happy to check it out in the future. Well done!
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