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MorosKyrios
MorosKyriosLv133yr
2021-05-14 21:02

Concept is good but has bad plot. MC has a gold fish brain. First he stated that he doesn't want to display his secrets to his family. Yet 1 chapter later, he openly use the system infront of many people. No Worldbuilding, author is just just write anything what comes to mind. Imagine how large of an area/food/water/barn is required to raise 1000 chickens? In a medieval setting? With 'poor' family background.

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Alvin_Coc
Alvin_CocLv13

Exp

reincarnation_end
reincarnation_endLv4

True 👍

deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1

read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

InsaneIzayoi
InsaneIzayoiLv10

Im not that sure anymore, but I think they said - even through they are poor, they have much land. Only problem is that the land isn't that good for corps and everything since they are at the border (mountain like area) + One of the first enemys also want their Land, doesnt he?

JustAFoXInTheDark
JustAFoXInTheDarkLv4

The mc said at chapter 1 that they have good land but failed to hire workers due to the fathers incompetence so they relied on the chicken farm

daoist_mt_kunlun
daoist_mt_kunlunLv5

I agree with brain dead MC but it's medieval times, and the family is a noble baron at the minimum they should have land bigger than commoner to match the title.

Efren_Vazquez
Efren_VazquezLv13

They mention that eggs are too expensive, but they give them away to half the world.

Clash_Us_Ten
Clash_Us_TenLv3

chicken 🐓

InsaneIzayoi:Im not that sure anymore, but I think they said - even through they are poor, they have much land. Only problem is that the land isn't that good for corps and everything since they are at the border (mountain like area) + One of the first enemys also want their Land, doesnt he?
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