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Mysterious_Pen
Mysterious_PenAuthor3yrMysterious_Pen

Hello, welcome to "I Can Extract Everything". I'm here to give you a warning before you read this novel. 1.This novel is not a Harem genre, and I already tagged it. 2. I'm still a budding writer. You would find many mistakes, inconsistencies, and familiarity, especially in chapters 1 - 10. After I read the Buddha's Palm Sign-In, I wrote this book and then got a sudden inspiration. As for ISSTH, I took it because I wasn't sure how to explain the sect's environment. It just so happened that WNs held a WFP with the theme of "Academy," so I had no choice to start the sect's story. 3. Even though I titled it "I Can Extract Everything," it doesn't mean the system can extract everything. The system has several limitations, and please read the novel for more details. 4. My grammar is horrible, I received many complaints here, and I can't help it. I'm not native English, and English isn't even my second language. I wrote this novel relying on 30% of my English skills, 35% Google Translator, and 35% Grammarly. Therefore, if you have a Grammar-complex, I advise you not to read this novel; it might hurt your eyes and brain cells, and your English language skills might also regress. Don't say that I didn't warn you and later complain, "I regret reading this novel and blablabla..." Of course, that doesn't mean I won't improve my Grammar. I'll hire an editor once I have the money hehe... However, sometimes some readers took the initiative to correct my chapters. They are very kind people, and I really appreciate them. 5. I tagged the weak-to-strong genre. This means MC started from weak and indirectly OP. 6. MC Character: I can say he is a little clever, cautious, friendly, a little funny, decisive, and more importantly, he knew no pride as long as he survives in this world. Also, I want to tell you this. People may have misunderstood both Earth people and Cultivation World people. The environment of the Cultivation World was harsher than that of the Earth. Killing, stealing, scheming, and fighting had become the daily lifestyles of natively born people there. Therefore, I think their thought is more mature than Earth people whose activities are only sleeping, studying, playing and working. Especially MC, when he was on Earth, he was just a student and the second rich generation who relied on his parents' money to get through his life. The only advantage he brought from Earth to this cultivation world was the moral of his character. When he transmigrated to the Cultivation World, he spent six years of his life in the mortal world without touching anything related to the supernatural. The moment he entered the Cultivation World, he was cautious as he was trying his best to adapt to this cruel world and he pretty much lack common sense in this cultivation world. He maintains good relations with those around him, often acted dumb to lower other people's guard toward him, and he doesn't care about pride at all because he knows pride is of no use to weak people like him. But he is very decisive when he meets his enemies, killing or to be killed... 7. So far, there has been no romance, and I have no intention of making romance any time soon. Actually, I still have a lot to say, but... I'm too lazy to type. So, if you have any questions, please comment under the comment column. Btw, I gave this novel 5 stars because I personally think this novel a perfect novel for myself XD

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I Can Extract Everything

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sfins
sfinsLv2sfins

I love the academy sect as the start point and careful mc Just writing this to say you're doing a great job and I love this book BTW I thought you already got an editor because saw you replying to a comment under a chapter about them being an editor for free wish you luck to get a editor and get this book rank higher

Mysterious_Pen
Mysterious_PenAuthorMysterious_Pen

Yeah, but he stills a beginner. He wanted to try it on my novel, and I just allow him. Therefore, I still need some readers to give me corrective feedback 😄

sfins:I love the academy sect as the start point and careful mc Just writing this to say you're doing a great job and I love this book BTW I thought you already got an editor because saw you replying to a comment under a chapter about them being an editor for free wish you luck to get a editor and get this book rank higher
sfins
sfinsLv2sfins

Reader feedback is best I text that person on discord they said they've written and edited before however

Mysterious_Pen:Yeah, but he stills a beginner. He wanted to try it on my novel, and I just allow him. Therefore, I still need some readers to give me corrective feedback 😄
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv3Master_Celestial

Feedback for grammar? Here: the past tenses are pretty messed up, some words are wrongly written and let‘s not talk about sentence structure. Sometimes whole sentences are wrong and mean something completely different from what you want to write. As for how I know what you mean to say, that would be to link the situation with the paragraphs before and after to somehow figure out what you meant. Many words in sentences are also missing. All in all the grammar is bad but not so bad that you can‘t read it. You just need to reform the sentences in your head or comprehend their meaning. It worsens the experience but is better than some other novels.

Mysterious_Pen:Yeah, but he stills a beginner. He wanted to try it on my novel, and I just allow him. Therefore, I still need some readers to give me corrective feedback 😄
DaoistES0db8
DaoistES0db8Lv1DaoistES0db8

???

_ReAdEr_
_ReAdEr_Lv3_ReAdEr_

It's seems interesting and the not harem tag was the icing on the cake. Added to library :)

Izzy_xyarin
Izzy_xyarinLv3Izzy_xyarin

This is the first novel i have bookmarked. I am starting this and thanks for your explanation about novel which cleared my doubt so I can decide to read it. In my opinion I think every author should write like this about his novel. It really helped.

peaceful_asura
peaceful_asuraLv3peaceful_asura

Where have you gone? ..................................................

Melting_Heart
Melting_HeartLv14Melting_Heart

Yeah, we are still waiting for more chapters [img=update]

Kaitoxp
KaitoxpLv3Kaitoxp

Hello author?!... So hmmm what happened to the story? You didn't update any chapters. Is this dropped?

Mysterious_Pen:Yeah, but he stills a beginner. He wanted to try it on my novel, and I just allow him. Therefore, I still need some readers to give me corrective feedback 😄
Aris_Lounis_46
Aris_Lounis_46Lv3Aris_Lounis_46

So are you back or no ?

Unravell
UnravellLv2Unravell

Please can you continue this novel.

Divine_univers
Divine_universLv15Divine_univers

so wait is this novel dropped or what happened

rachelesque
rachelesqueLv14rachelesque

I don’t know if you’ll see this, but I’m willing to edit your novel for free. I’m a native English speaker and do a lot of editing in my career, so this wouldn’t be an issue for me.

Delther
DeltherLv4Delther

do u have a discord server?

Delther
DeltherLv4Delther

hey you mysterious pen do you have a discord server answer me cuz I wanna ask you spoiler

Mysterious_Pen:Yeah, but he stills a beginner. He wanted to try it on my novel, and I just allow him. Therefore, I still need some readers to give me corrective feedback 😄