This is a very good novel but their are thing that are not right 1 a completely average person does not have -1000000 mana and you said at the beginning that only 1 out of 20 can talk to spirits and last a completely average person does not play the flute so good.. (Oh and the way the system contribute exp is shit but that is a personal thing)
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LIKEHello! Thank you for the review! Just to clarify something, Mana and Karma are distinct stats in the book. While Mana is a resource for Kotori to use Karma has 0 use in the world and just meant for the purpose of reincarnation. It's based on Buddhist cycles of reincarnation where worldly Karma is used to ascend to higher planes of being Also, this might need to be explained better, but Kotori is "average" at the flute she only gets good with it when she uses her [Mana Muscian] Skill which lets her channel mana into songs. Thanks for reading!