Nothing terrible. Fair a small more linguistic use and rectifications. Incredible characters you've got there. Do not you think the chapters are a bit as well brief? We suggest atleast 1k words. But it's your story anyway, I don't need to meddled along with your plans. That's all I can say basing from my level of feedback.
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