Review Detail of Brandongould94 in World Devouring System

Hello this is Brandon Gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epici am responding to a review swap that i sent earlier I have read a few chapters and am enjoying the book so far. but there were a few things that i could suggest Maybe put some more background detail on events that happen in the book as well as add diolage of what the people are saying so that the reader can understand more what is going on rather then being told what is happening. besides that the book has a good pace to it and will continue to see where it goes from here