Review Detail of TaintedMetal in The Grandmaster's Rebirth

A very straightforward novel. The premise is simple and easy to understand. Parts of the novel are engaging with the actions scenes. However I think there's a tad bit too much of telling for the characters as well as the world itself. Long story short, there needs to be glimpses of showing so it paints a better picture for the audience in terms of characters, who they are, what they look like, ad how action scenes play out. I can see the potetial of this story. It's just the writing style that needs more work. Many like the fight scenes or the introduction of characters could be shown instead of told. There's nothing wrong with going straight to the point, I think there shouldn't be too much of "straight to the point storytelling." But overall, it's enjoyable. Keep on writing author.