The writing quality for this book is pretty decent. Though there seems to be some tenses problems going on here and there. The detailing of it is pretty much the better of it. Good volume in emotions and detailing. Stability of updates are a tad wonky. Sometimes taking a few days then suddenly an amp of continuous ones, which can bwork out for its levels of details. Story developement is pretty stable. Slowly developing an interesting world with the characters having their own individual participation in their own views and motives. Same goes for the character developement. The world background for now is pretty slim but it will soon slowly increase, no doubt about it. Keep up the good work Author!
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