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2021-08-24 10:01

I dont understand a thing in this story omg my head hurt so much theres a lot of character pov thats its confusing i dont even know whos the mc ace or whatno…. :/ i will not read this stupid story (my Opinion) only writer can delete my review not care

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OK. Could you give me more info on how to improve it? :)

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Wow. I actually really like this book and appreciate the time and effort the author puts into it. Keep it up, I'll definitely stick around for more.[img=fp][img=coins]

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I really appreciate the author for writing a book with a lot of chapters like this. Moreover, this book is not only a cliche romance book that doesn't need a lot of effort to write. This book needs a lot of effort since it has a heavy theme. It needs a lot of imagination, and the author did a good job! Thank you! 😸

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