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Yourdailyreader
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Just finished reading all the 3 chapters, Gotta say, I am quite interested, Really has a Shounen kind of vibe from it. In terms of character development, I think that it is quite a fresh idea to have a main character that is unable to feel some of the emotions that normal people can. His inner conflict is really shown in the first chapter and I am interested to see his character development. But I think that the author could make it a bit clearer for readers to understand that he is unable to feel anger, fear, or sorrow. I thought it was kind of vague... As for story development, I really thought that the growing relationship between our main character and heroine was really cute. Their relationship is something you'd see in an average rom-com novels. I can't wait to see how their relationship progresses, In conclusion, I think this novel has great potential and I also advise others to check it out! Will definitely be looking out for new chapters frequently. Well done.

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God's Play(DISCONTINUED ROUGH DRAFT)

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Thank you very much for the honest review! I try my hardest to bring out the most quality and plot to entertain the readers ( •̀ .̫ •́ )✧ Thank you once again for the support o(* ̄▽ ̄*)ブ