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2024-10-10 14:35

Overall, the story was enjoyable, but there’s one minor issue I noticed. In certain places, the absence of commas made the flow a bit unclear. For readers who are newer to novels, this might create a sense of uncertainty in understanding. I came across this while reading for inspiration for Chapter 8 of my novel, Beyond Imagination: Journey to the Dark.

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