Review Detail of DaoistS3SSHq in Overgeared: Crossroad of the past and future
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Even if this is fanfiction, the storyline is seriously good. But there is fatal flaw that is not same with the original novel, the system never interfere with the action of the players. But we don't know the future so i don't know everything.
Overgeared: Crossroad of the past and future
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Hello! Thank you for your honest review, I appreciate criticism such as yours. I do agree that in the later chapters(mainly the last 2) the system does seem to interfere a bit too much. This has been a hard decision for me to make, that being the threshold of the events' scale before the system directly interferes. Although it's more of a personal choice and not that coherent with the original work, I hope it doesn't damage the immersion of you and other readers' that much as it only serves to inform the readers of the impact of some actions and events and won't affect it directly. Hope you will enjoy the other works/chapters to come!