This is a story that really makes you go 'Hmmmmmm...' It makes me feel many emotions I never knew I could feel Anyhow, let's get to the review. Quality is nice, You can understand everything that's going on, it's just a bit hard to get used to the Author's writing style. There were a few mixups of present and past tense, but I know that writing in first person POV is hell, so I can kinda relate to Author. Story development. The things that are happening are nice, but they happen way too fast. It would've been really great if the author depicted MC interacting and being happy with the rest of her family, before the crash happened. At that point, the accident would've left a much deeper impression. I know many authors feel the need to push on with the story asap, but sometimes, it's best to set up some stuff, before the big shocking moment appears. Character design: like that dude said in the preface, MC is kinda dumb. I'm guessing she'll grow up to be a more likeable character, but for now... it's a bit hard to like her. And the way she fell into some muscleboi's hands when she was gonna become CEO of that company and immediately fell in love... Oof. But I can see how this scene helps a lot in defining her character as an idiot. Right after this happened, her uncle doesn't even reprimand her, instead he's like 'You like that muscleboi? I know you like that musclboi, heheh' It shows how no one in her family talked shit to her for her entire life. So it's obvious she'd turn out to be dumb and unthinking. She never had the need to think about things, as she was doing all fine thinking nothing during her entire life. Phew. I think that's all for characters. There's evil Jason and controlling Luke, but I couldn't read that far yet, soo... World background. K-drama world?
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Wow, thank you so much. This is probably the most honest review I have gotten so far and I’m grateful for that. Yeah, the FL is kinda dumb, lol. But it’s not really her fault ,her parents pampered her a lot and suddenly she had to do everything on her own. It’s hard for someone who have always had everything given to her, to start working for all she has now. Also, I agree with you when you say the story is fast paced in the beginning . I thought long and hard before writing it too, but if you read a little further, you’ll get why it is like that in the beginning . I guess it’s a ‘the more you read, the clearer it becomes’ kind of book. Thank you once again for your review. I’m really grateful .
