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Alima_Mahazabin
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2021-07-08 23:20

Great job! Love the character design and plot, the dialogue could use a bit of tweaking but otherwise, the story is great! Keep up the great work!

Double Iris

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ibbygal
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Hey, I am the author of this book, I would be really happy if y'all read, vote, review, recommend and add my book to your reading list. Thank you very much...means a lot👉🏽👈🏽🖤🖤🖤🖤

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Etherealthewriter
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Wow! Such a related story for sure. The synopsis alone was enough to let me add the story to my reading list. Well done author i highly recommend everyone to read it.

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steph_pesi
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Mysterious synopsis. That's what drew me in. The story is an interesting one. Portraying real life, and real life challenges that people face. A really relatable story, I'm supporting the lead character and hoping for more.

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L1v
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I loved the synopsis. It intrigued me to read the book. the storyline is different and captivating. I couldn't put the book down once I started reading. Good work!

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Sheefta_Naz
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The plot is really interesting. I actually like the main character developement. The hard work and the research on the story of the author is reflected in this story beautifully. Best of luck on your story

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Aj_Friday
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This really like this book. the characters are engaging and the help build the world around them. the writing style and how the characters talk really push the story foward. good job👍🏽

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Leon_Kingraph
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Excellent novel with interesting plot. I enjoyed reading the first chapters and I am sure that further it will get only more interesting. Everything is well written and events develop logically. That is why it is easy to read and it is exciting. I highly recommend this novel.

3yr
Ramsha_Rais
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I really really loved the synopsis and I thought I would give it a try and it was totally worth it! I just loveeee the author's way of writing ! and choice of words! I highly recommend this book!! P.S : I like the character of Iris veeryyy much..... Great work author!!

3yr
KaGen
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The writing style is good, the length of the paragraphs is enough long for being easy to read. The percentage of the dialogues is high, it is increasing readability. The updating frequency maybe increase. A good novel, thanks to the author.

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