Review Detail of Allhavens in One piece: God Level one piece Extraction System
Review detail
Legible writing, although not perfect. Interesting storyline, with no flaws found so far. His system is not instantaneous OP, although I feel frustrated in his place to see sss rank abilities and cannot be extracted. The only problem I encounter in this story is the low number of chapters and the relatively slow release rate. The fact that the chapter is not very big also only worsens this delay.
One piece: God Level one piece Extraction System
Nirjung_Dangi
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No problems. As I said, the story is very good. Basically a pearl in the pile of garbage that exists on this site. My only frustration is not having many chapters to read or the chapters being much longer. I don't know if it is a translation or an original fanfic, but if it were a translation I would love to have the raw link in the description just to kill my curiosity in the development of the story.
Nirjung_Dangi:Thanks for the review. I am trying hard, but if you are unsatisfied then sorry for giving you hard time. Thank you, your review motivated me. Asking for forgiveness!!!!.
Allhavens:No problems. As I said, the story is very good. Basically a pearl in the pile of garbage that exists on this site. My only frustration is not having many chapters to read or the chapters being much longer. I don't know if it is a translation or an original fanfic, but if it were a translation I would love to have the raw link in the description just to kill my curiosity in the development of the story.
Nirjung_Dangi:Even if i provide you the link all the chapters are locked. As well as you wont find Stone or Garp.