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TaintedMetal
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2021-03-28 21:00

Reincarnation stories have previously been drowned and drowned with the formula of "average protagonist getting nae nae'd by a truck/anything else" akin to an anime and then proceeds to get either OP, a harem on the way, level up systems, whatever. This novel thankfully attempts to avoid most of that. Reincarnation is still an outline here, but I appreciate all of the author's efforts of making the reincarnation unique, in this case, the protagonist becomes a sword. The only real criticism I had was the overall writing itself. I was bothered by the opening and the early chapters, where I understood what was going on but the overall pacing was just too fast. It gets better the more you read though. Also, might I say about the protagonist's name: Kylo? XP. I hope he's not related to Kylo Ren from Star Wars (just kidding XD) All in all, it's a simple but easy to understand read. There's enough in here to make you think "well, this is certainly different than most reincarnation novels."

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hey man thanks for your review:) About the starting chaps... yeah they do suck a little... though chapter 20 onwards they improve as mentioned in synopsis.. well I did edit them few days back but once a wall is cracked you can only repair it and can't make it completely new 😔😔 The pacing i controlled in the later chaps so i hope there are no issues there... though i would want to know a reader's view after 35 or so chaps... About name, nope definitely not... *inwardly screaming* (How the hell did you know) xD jokes aside yeah it will definitely be revealed why his name is Kylo by the end of vol 1 :) About sword.. yeah I wanted something original, (though this ain't completely an original one), i am glad you liked my concept.. All in all thanks for your honest reviews once again, i hope you keep reading and commenting on the chaps. thanks~

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