So this was OK up until after he got to the fate stay verse. During that, there became too many girls to even keep track of. After that, he didn't even care about the story where he was going. It's just a list of girls that he wants. I mean, I can write a list of hot girls also. It doesn't make it a good story.
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LIKEI love op wish fulfillment stories, but there is a way to do it even with 100 girls and still make it fun and interesting. As an example one of my fav massive harem stories is called "Harem War" its a harry Potter harem story that has a whole world built arround why he has a harem and why its actually a kindness. The problem with JUST wish fulfillment is that it gets boring to read after a while, fulfilling no ones wish.