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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author4yr
2021-01-29 20:10

Author is here, the book is pretty much here because I'm bored. 1- I'm not a native English speaker so there are bound to be grammatical errors. 2- There will be no story development as the MC is the strongest existence, and since I don't know how to write romance so I am predicting that it'll be trash. 3- The characters will pretty much be bland, I mean the dude can literally fart and wipe the omniverse and is lazy so what do you expect? 4- Updating stability is non-existent, I'll update whenever I feel like it and if I lost interest I'd drop it even after the prologue. 5- World background? I'm plagiarizing other works and not gonna add original content except my protagonist. _____________________ This is pretty much an honest and objective review on what you're gonna read, so if you want to continue then you're welcome.

Lazy Life As The Primordial

Darkstar11051999
4.6
33 Chs

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Shadewind
ShadewindLv6

harem....?

4yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

Yes.

Shadewind:harem....?
4yr
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Itachi_Hyoudou
Itachi_HyoudouLv4

I think you shouldn't underestimate your self. Tbh you write better than me.

4yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

I appreciate it, but I really love your book lol.

Itachi_Hyoudou:I think you shouldn't underestimate your self. Tbh you write better than me.
4yr
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TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv14

You drop already?

4yr
Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

No, just busy with exams right now. Will probably start updating by next Sunday.

TheLonelyGod:You drop already?
4yr
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Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14

any future lemon chapters. also does the harem follow him through the multiverse

Darkstar11051999:No, just busy with exams right now. Will probably start updating by next Sunday.
3yr
Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

So far no lemons(going all the way), and the girls sometimes follow him to the new world, or stay with him in their normal world since the MC is Omnipresent and exists in all the worlds at the same time.

Jackson_Alucard611:any future lemon chapters. also does the harem follow him through the multiverse
3yr
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Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

Are you still going to continue this one day bud? You're both a great writer and editor so it would be a shame to see this dropped. (Unless you're going to start a different novel that is.)

3yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

It's not dropped, I enjoy writing it. I am currently really busy my internship and training(check the image) I still try to write in my free time and already has about 4k words ready for the next chap. Glad u enjoyed the book. P.s If I ever decided to drop the book, I will be decent enough to leave a drop notice and not leave it hanging like this.

Ototsu_Yume:Are you still going to continue this one day bud? You're both a great writer and editor so it would be a shame to see this dropped. (Unless you're going to start a different novel that is.)
3yr
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Ototsu_Yume
Ototsu_YumeLv11

Thanks for the reply. :) In that case I wish you all the best and hope you don't get burnout.

Darkstar11051999:It's not dropped, I enjoy writing it. I am currently really busy my internship and training(check the image) I still try to write in my free time and already has about 4k words ready for the next chap. Glad u enjoyed the book. P.s If I ever decided to drop the book, I will be decent enough to leave a drop notice and not leave it hanging like this.
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3yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

Thank you.

Ototsu_Yume:Thanks for the reply. :) In that case I wish you all the best and hope you don't get burnout.
3yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Lemon?

3yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

Only once in chapter 24.

Zzz_808:Lemon?
3yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

Aw less I think

Darkstar11051999:Only once in chapter 24.
3yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

I'm confused by your storyline, at first you avoid the dere characters" but then many dere-dere characters are troublesome, even Ai (sai) becomes a cursed dere-dere. you like dropping your story into the abyss, at first I enjoyed it but then became disappointed with the change in scene.

Darkstar11051999:Only once in chapter 24.
3yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

First, thanks for the feedback, and sorry to disappoint you. I never said that I hate tsundere girls, I said that I absolutely loath the abusive kind of tsundere like Taiga and Luis. I may not prefer tsuns, but sometimes they can be kinda cute as long as they are not the violent type...

Zzz_808:I'm confused by your storyline, at first you avoid the dere characters" but then many dere-dere characters are troublesome, even Ai (sai) becomes a cursed dere-dere. you like dropping your story into the abyss, at first I enjoyed it but then became disappointed with the change in scene.
3yr
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3

it doesn't matter, that's why I refrain from commenting out loud, so I'm just arguing in the comments with you, what's the difference between rude tsun if you can submit to the tsun you make now which is troublesome, it's the same writer

Darkstar11051999:First, thanks for the feedback, and sorry to disappoint you. I never said that I hate tsundere girls, I said that I absolutely loath the abusive kind of tsundere like Taiga and Luis. I may not prefer tsuns, but sometimes they can be kinda cute as long as they are not the violent type...
3yr
Hunter_69
Hunter_69Lv13

I hate taiga and Louise 🤣

Darkstar11051999:First, thanks for the feedback, and sorry to disappoint you. I never said that I hate tsundere girls, I said that I absolutely loath the abusive kind of tsundere like Taiga and Luis. I may not prefer tsuns, but sometimes they can be kinda cute as long as they are not the violent type...
3yr
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Darkstar11051999
Darkstar11051999Author

Same...

Hunter_69:I hate taiga and Louise 🤣
3yr
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