So let's start with writing quality..... It's good. one of the fanfics that has decent and understandable sentences and grammar. The writing is not really detailed for those who like to long paragraphs who give off many explanations. To me the writing is giving me a vibe of relaxation and it's pretty easy to understand yep. The updating stability, considering it's still early, not much is known. It might change later as the novel goes on. But hey! The author did post 4 chapters at once! So I'll give it a good review. Story development. Just like the updating stability, the story hasn't progressed that much yet. But the story does have a good writing so expect the fanfic to be understandable and good. Character Design. Well we can't really replicate a character completely right? But the characters here do have feelings and do not talk like robots or some sh*t. The interactions are pretty well said if I do say. The mc seems like a guy who's pretty hype and loves his waifus dearly. Now the world background is great. Author really thought of this. Well you can check the auxiliary chapters there and you'll know what I mean. Hey! Author-san! Thnx for making this novel. I like fate series so having something related to fate really make me want to read it. Better yet this fanfic is one of the novels which has potential. Hope for some more good chapters! Peace.
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Thank you for the review i really appreciate it, Im really just not fond of long explanations when you can just shorten it but still make it understandable.
Freix_Gren:Thank you for the review i really appreciate it, Im really just not fond of long explanations when you can just shorten it but still make it understandable.
author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem 2) will he take care for his harem 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he tells her to forget him and find someone else) 4) will mc take them with him if he goes to far placesa d last 5)will there be smut,r18 or mentioned
Freix_Gren:Thank you for the review i really appreciate it, Im really just not fond of long explanations when you can just shorten it but still make it understandable.
1.) Yes 2.) Yes 3.) Not really, atleast not at the breaking up scale and starting up a cold war and the mc telling girls to forget him, i mean he hasn't even explored the world as much as i made him to be hahhahaha 4.) Trust me when i tell you that powerful anime girls won't wait for the mc to tell them to go with them, i mean he summons the anime character or game characters hahahhaa 5.) Sorry mate, I don't want to write any smut related chaps.
Thesoultaker88:author i have some questions before reading and those are 1) will mc love his harem 2) will he take care for his harem 3) will there be drama (like one girl does not like harem and breaks up with mc or they start a cold war and so on or mc can't take her so he tells her to forget him and find someone else) 4) will mc take them with him if he goes to far placesa d last 5)will there be smut,r18 or mentioned
