Review Detail of Kronos661 in Larry Bottem and the Sorcerer's Scone

As promised, I leave my review here. Please take a look at my book. First of all, I read a few chapters and some things caught my attention. The grammar was very good, I had no difficulty in understanding it, but I want to say that the chapters are very long. I was bored at some points while reading. You can shorten the chapters a little more and make them into multiple chapters. Other than that, your book is fine. I like it.