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amaturewriter
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-pretty dope. SI mineta that isnt perverted and above all plans and gets stronger through normal means and is smart. I like that. would like to see him use his meta knowledge for his advantage, like sciences and fictional shit and show it. like his plans, the process, the execution rather than glossing over like most ffs. SS idea is cool. perhaps some mutated captain America shit? -dont really like the happy friendly shit but it is done well and isnt too cringe nor annoying. so nice. would request MC to not be overly friendly not too cringe edgy but middle that suits his past from the first chps, plus he is an SI -Any relationships just build, no rush. And show progress.' suggestion: -Give the balls the ability of kinetic manipulation. ex: any force on balls, MC can absorb it to increase strength, etc like a nerfed version of shaw from x men -kidomaru from naruto could excrete some shit from sweat pores to create armour, something similar like that to allow MC to do same for his ability? and if you do this, some shit like trebols sticky thing?? or even katakuris shit? but nerfed. -Allow pop off to have the duplication ability through mitosis? like when he throws the ball, it immediately multiplies into thousands? and he can control its state of matter or just use it as a giant trap -Ability to control size of the balls, like make em small as a grain of sand or bloodcell [ like MC could transmute/breakdown a normal size ball into tiny tiny shit ] but increase the stickiness to an insane amount if he requires to do so. like an on off ability. without stickiness he can use it like the nanites from big hero six? -Ability to make the balls toxic, or poisonous or acidic -transmute his ball shit, like change state of matter to liquid or gas and ability to control viscosity and stickiness. -control the ball telekinetically? like yondus arrows for ex? MC can through and speed em up to insane speeds? --in all honesty I like minetas ability cause its weak but can be OP cause of bnha evolution thing for quirks, would like to see one of the shit I mentioned above or authors own shit that makes the quirk OP. [ even if it were a glass cannon- prefer MC is not GC but eh ] GL

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My Hero Academia: Mineta's Redemption

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RisingCaos
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You'll be really surprised in the future...

Darnelljoe
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Why do people hate it when the MC is friendly? I personally like it.

RisingCaos
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Because it's not their demographic but they still read it for some reason, that was exactly why I added the shounen tag though... If anything I'm an author who advocates the golden Shonen Jump motto 'Friendship, Effort, Victory'. It holds a lot of meaning for me and is something I want to give to my readers, as I believe that something that brings me happiness will also do the same for them in a way or another.

Darnelljoe:Why do people hate it when the MC is friendly? I personally like it.
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

not when MC has a shitty past. then it just removes the point of shitty past when you make him friendly. why give shitty past then?

Darnelljoe:Why do people hate it when the MC is friendly? I personally like it.