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docaqui
docaquiLv113yr
2021-07-15 00:30

this is actually awesome, ngl.. very well written and very well describe for the characters. tho, i do warn anyone who will read this review, i only read the first chapter and i can say that it is already good.. the only problem i have is the wall of text.. i suggest that you should tone it down to 2 to 3 sentences per paragraph so it doesn't look like it is so compacted.

ISLAND OF MEMORIES

AJONAFXX
4.7
158 Chs

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AJONAFXX
AJONAFXXAuthor

highly appreciated!!

3yr
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Garvita_Kushwaha
Garvita_KushwahaLv1

The story is interesting. One thing I want to add is that, the author should leave more paragraphs. The details and conversations are a little messed up, so it's a little bit hard to read. I gave you 5 stars only because I know you can improve and besides, one bad rating can ruin everything.

3yr

tanu_sam
tanu_samLv14

TBH,It's a good story. The fL is stupid but when you use the genre teen...you have remember that Teens are bound to do silly mistakes and that's what Lucy is doing...I won't give much spoilers coz it will apoil the fun. I want Lucia to be d@m adult but she as a teenage girl is acting a per age. As for Leo,I have no words for him. He is confusing me...I can't hate him nor I can like him.... But for once I really want them to think with a clam brain....and perhaps all their problems will be solved...but what's the fun of story if the solve the problem in day one?

3yr
The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv13

Reveal spoiler

3yr
DaoistRUC9Eq
DaoistRUC9EqLv1

I like everything on this novel, it has a deep meaning and I wanted to read more from this book. Keep it up author! More chapters to come because I do wanted to read more too!!

3yr
Yaminoyosei
YaminoyoseiLv12

This book is very good. From the start I really found it interesting and the plot is really nice. The characters and everything that happens make you want to read more!

3yr
_Yuvi_
_Yuvi_Lv2

I love this novel 😍 it was amazing to read 📚 not only this but other as well. hey I usually won't read this types of novel so I can't complain or comment any thing but I can say pls read the novels throughly if you miss one of it chapters then boom everything would be messed and you won't get what plot point. lastly Sis Ajona keep working pls 😭

3yr
Naz_Mzf
Naz_MzfLv14

the story that would drag you in, give it a chance to enjoy your time, lovely.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
_lixiethy
_lixiethyLv2

This is a good story! I wonder what Lucia's daughter will react if her parents get back together? Well, let's see! Thank you for your hard work, Author!

3yr
Ghost_Sinker
Ghost_SinkerLv10

A very romantic novel and i like how the author will add mystery in each chapter that hook me to know what will happened in the future chapter. can not wait to see how this novel will develop in the future. O(∩_∩)O

3yr
RoseOfBlues
RoseOfBluesLv2

I totally fell in love with the cover and the synopsis. The latter was really well written, although it was too short. The first hundred words were definitely enough to capture my attention. I love the way the story explain the scene with good vocabulary. My only complaint is that I can't understand whether the story is in the third person or first person as that hasn't been mentioned. I am desperate to know more about the future of the two. I wonder how they will come back together and if they will ever fall in love again.

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