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Review Detail of Crackgear in Hiding Behind My Mask

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This story is superb, a very constant view when it comes from its initial and middle plots. Being a contemporary romance, there is some parts that may be found to be a tad, awkward. The writing skill of the author is pretty good. Very good use of punctuations, paragraphing and volume in detail. From a first time stand point, this story is very eye-catching from the start lifting a very exciting and happy tone to its readers. The stability of updates are also reasonable good, even if there is some gaps in between, the detail in story levels up to it. Character designs are pretty good, fitting for the story. Each have their own proposition in plot and makes up to it with its consistent personality, attitude and relations of the other characters involved. World background is rather slim for now as detailing of a world is kind of hard and mostly done within a set area or a certain part of residence, P.S - Try to make your first letter in your title capital, it would feel abit more exciting and put on in time.

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Hiding Behind My Mask

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That was a thoroughly done review. I really appreciate it. I will be taking notes on your feedback and make changes or improvement on it as soon as I can. This story was done on a rush since I entered it in a contest, but I do plan to re-edit it and add some more details to make it more exciting and fun. Thanks for your help.