Review Detail of Shiny_Shirogane in Prays X Human 1
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I found your novel very mysterious. You have a wild imagination which is portrayed in your novel. At first, I thought aren't the chapters too short for WN then on CH 5 and 6 I realized you were making them purposely short to make your novel mysterious. My advice to the author would be to put some time aside for editing as the novel has some punctuation and grammatical errors here and there.
Prays X Human 1
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The story is inspired by the rules of structure of the slogan # 158, so we are going slowly and safely configuring the plot and the grammar editing among others comes later, for now to write recreating ... I feel happy to have friends writers who encourage, criticize and support the task. Thank you.