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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv44yr
2021-02-02 20:56

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With a unique take on the genre, this became standing out from the rest. This reader will recommend this to the new ones. More exposure will be a key to success. Kudos and Good luck!.....from review swap thread.

Mysterious Symbols

The_Celestial_King
4.9
9 Chs

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The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Thank you For the review, I appreciate

4yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Check out mine too! Title was The Grandmaster's Rebirth.

The_Celestial_King:Thank you For the review, I appreciate
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The_Celestial_King
The_Celestial_KingAuthor

Shameless Author Review I love My Novel to the point I'm bias, so I give it five stars. I am a new Author and this is my very first Novel. Cons English is not even my second language, so you should expect Grammar problems and spelling mistakes. Pls be patient I will improve gradually. Please provide your corrections, suggestions and insights in the comment section of every chapter. It will be helpful and good motivator. Productive critics are probative while abusive critic are unapproved If you like My Novel pls Like, Review, and give Power stone. Especially Power stone Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote THANK YOU

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emhassan14
emhassan14Lv1

Well just gave the Novel Full stars, cos the premise seems interesting to me but hope you will get better not backwards, steady update, story development, design and world background should be well thoughtout and keep it interesting.

4yr
Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv14

I read the author's note before proceeding to read the synopsis and the first chapters. I can say beyond doubt that the story is really captivating! and there were no traces of grammatical errors that the readers have been warned about. English is also not my second language so I can relate to the author's insecurity, but after reading the chapters, I can say that the author's fears have no basis at all. the book is a wonderful, beautiful piece of art and deserves this perfect 5 stars. I am also gifting the story as a piece of lucky charm from one author to another. best of luck in everything you write author-san!

3yr
ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv4

The plot and storyline is interesting. The update is okay I guess. The length of the chapter is something that is need to be improved. It is kinda slow pace which works for novels that has a mystery genre. Writing style and quality is great. All in all a great novel to read.

4yr
A_Valentine
A_ValentineLv1

I really liked the indeoth description of the character snd his environment in the first chapter, it really set a scene for me. I personally struggle to imagine scenes and need help with it. The grammar could use work and you could definitely benefit running it through or writing it in grammarly before publishing it.

4yr
GCarre
GCarreLv11

Extremely intriguing, the slow-paced storytelling gives a good mystery to look forward to. The conversation is intelligently set to make your mind interested and wonder. I like it and I look forward to reading more chapters.

4yr
Misumi
MisumiLv1

A great story full of fantasy and adventure. best of luck to the writer and his book. Enjoyable and delightful book....... Keep up the gud work

4yr
ShadowKatake
ShadowKatakeLv4

The novel has a lot of potentials and has a steady update and also is well written. I don't think there is a problem so far so good. If this is your first time writing then my first time is a disaster but I improved tho so good luck in your writing career.

4yr
Sahabi_abubakar
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A lot of newbie Authors pop up. From everywhere but few can write a unique story as you. Hope the Quality keep improving. New Author With Great Talent. I think you deserve a good Support.

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