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2021-06-22 00:28

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The Arcane Excursionist

Pikaaaaa0
4.4
28 Chs

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DaoistdVMJeW
DaoistdVMJeWLv1

The stories is getting better and better and i be waiting for more chapter in the future hope you won't be dropping this cause the stories is getting better every chapter

3yr

Pikaaaaa0
Pikaaaaa0Author

Hey. This author here is shamelessly giving himself a 5 star review. First chapters are not that great and will cause you some headache so you can drop or continue to read my book. Heh. Don't joke around, go and read more chapter to make your brain explode mongrel.

3yr
Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

I'll be honest here, I'm usually pretty soft with fanfics, as long as they're not too stupid. And this is one of those that is bad to the point that I just can't get a higher grade than that. The idea itself is ok, a standard fanfic that I would give a high note with a review saying that it is standard. Unfortunately, this fanfic has many problems that could be solved if the author thought a little about what he just wrote. Problems like the mc driving a car at the age of 16 in japan, moving to live alone without reason with the parents living in the same city, the ring given by GOD that hides the strength of the mc is apparently useless since a useless demon as Rias realized mc's power as soon as he looked at him, mc trying to act like gilgamesh, but as the author doesn't bother to describe the situation well, he looks more like someone with chuunibyou and finally, mc having a dark past along with some **TD, but the author only makes it relevant when the MC is already 16 years old and is done so abruptly that it looks completely artificial. Basically, the problems of this fanfic are not caused by the author's inexperience, they are problems seen in lazy works where the author does not bother to think much about what he wrote.

3yr
eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv4

Ugh... How do I start this... The mc is basically a ****ed douchebag. He has this background where all he did is good but gets backstabbed just to give him a reason to be edgy. He basically killed of Asia even though she's just like him according to the backstory. This basically made him just like the people who treated him like shit in his useless backstory. He never killed but could easily do it like killing an insect. Wasn't he supposed to be good who just have some hate in him? Then killing for the first time would've given him a bit of reaction. But no. Told ya useless backstory. He met Esdeath at one time go home with her for some stupid reason that she's alone too then 2 days later he introduced him to his parents. Sirzechs suddenly became a pussy who'll give a set of evil piece to a person he doesn't know just because Rias say he is powerful. Rias is weak so powerful for her is basically weak to Sirzechs, why the **** would he give the evil piece set especially how mentally unstable the mc is. Why didn't he just kill the mc? The mc already admitted that Sirzechs is stronger than him. And wtf is his being a poser for? He throws of the word Mongrel to anyone just to buff up his fragile ego, It's fucking annoying. It's basically a novel a made by some highschooler who's trying to be Gilgamesh even though he's a total bitch.

3yr
omobsewae
omobsewaeLv4

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3yr
Vora
VoraLv14

Just giving it five star just because. I just have a question author what about the ring that he got from god that make him look like a normal human. how could other's sense his magical power when he has the ring on?

3yr
Dekxz
DekxzLv4

The story is getting better,good job[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

3yr
victor_dupretz
victor_dupretzLv1

Good more please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please !!!!

3yr
IMakeEOD
IMakeEODLv3

It's funny and enjoyable to read. Not overly serious, but serious enough to make you keep paying attention to the story instead of just skimming.

3yr
carrotpie
carrotpieLv5

At the beginning its not the best . Especially the ... spearm scene .But it starts to get good after that i havent finished the chapters that are currently here yet though . so you never know but so far its looking good .

3yr
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