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2024-03-09 09:45

This was a really good story! I noticed a few grammar mistakes and it made a really big jump when they kissed in the bathroom. It felt a bit rushed and not thought through very well. other than that it was a great story! Great ideas! I also loved how you switched between POVs and how you were showing the flashbacks. I definitely recommend!

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