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2021-11-23 02:53

A short preface: as it seems, the writer is only 15 years of age, and coincidentally, that is also the age I began writing at, and I simply wish good luck to this newbie author on their writing endeavors. The writing quality makes for a legible book, though the earlier chapters need refinement in regards to small grammatical and syntactical mistakes. Not much to say on the updates. The story and characters are developed in a nice way, and with time and more content, will get the fleshing they deserve. As for the world background, it's one that I like, and the author does present it in a well-done manner, though more exposition in the earlier chapters wouldn't hurt.

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