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2021-01-31 18:06

Well, it is very early to comment on the story as it has only 4 chapters. But, they do provide good insight in the world that the author is trying to create. Maybe after reading further I will be able to understand it better. Do release more chaps author. It has been a good read so far.

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thank you very much for reviewing 😘 I'll try my best to update more

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