Review Detail of krushandkill in Alex Brim, Hero for Hire

I gave myself a lower star on the writing style, because I am perfectly aware I need to improve. The story will develop slowly, with the Earth life showing the peaceful side of the MC, that makes him being too kind on the other more violent world, Azurath. As the MC travels and gets into danger in Azurath, he will slowly change. If that change will be reflected on his other life on Earth, one must read the story, to find out. Along his journeys, he will face many dangers and situations, that will for sure make him rethink about his purpose as the Hero of Azurath.