Review Detail of Lisa_Schmidt_5441 in Fated

Item: Fated
Rating: 3

Review detail

Lisa_Schmidt_5441Lv152yrLisa_Schmidt_5441

chapters were all over the place and out of order characters and story was decent story was a little abrupt with the progress and ending could have lengthened out to give more depth to the story and characters

Fated

Jay Mhekzyy

Liked by 1 people

Replies1

Jay_MhekzyLv2Jay_Mhekzy

Hi there, I'm sorry the book ended abruptly and there are a lot of things that are not revealed yet. I might try to do a sequel for it later. However, the reason it ended was that I couldn't make changes to it, and it seemed messed up already.

2yr