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2021-04-02 23:54

The timeline of the story is nice. The way you describe events is also good. But I think you should update more often. Because that would attract a looot of readers.

Missions Undercover: Mission Rescue

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It is a very good story. I like the plot and how there are some twists in it. But I think you should update it more often. Also, the theme is cool. I really am waiting for the grand finale of this book. You are doing a good job. Keep it up!!

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