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rskdrama
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First of all, if it's your first novel why would you lock chapters at 13? in the first 12 chapters that read, or I tried to read with the kind of you me conversation in the same paragraph, I will not be progressing! unless you are an 'other world' reader, and looking for for this kind of writing, it's hard to follow!

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Follow Through

Alisa Leslie

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Alisa_Leslie269
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Actually I didn't lock my chaps from 13, I'm trying to have that fixed because it's supposed to be locked from 21.Not everyone will like my book and that's ok but before you judge or criticize my writing how about you work on writing a paragraph that's actually coherent,if you even know what that word means 😊

rskdrama
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wow... ok. if you are writing, and am a reader, I get to appreciate, criticize, decipher, and leave my review... if you think you did good, I would give appreciative comments; but my comments are as per what I perceive, not to appease a writer!

Alisa_Leslie269:Actually I didn't lock my chaps from 13, I'm trying to have that fixed because it's supposed to be locked from 21.Not everyone will like my book and that's ok but before you judge or criticize my writing how about you work on writing a paragraph that's actually coherent,if you even know what that word means 😊