Review Detail of i_did_this1st in Follow Through

Oh my mango. Love the fruit swearing. It's the best part for me so far. They say it's clique to use a wake up scene for the first chapter of a book but this is the best wake up scene that I've seen so far. The character and everything is so we'll developed in this story is like you've spend every amount of brain space on this story for me I can't write a fantasy story to save my life. keep up the good work author.