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2021-04-12 05:37

The premise is cool but the MC kills this story. In chapter one the MCs best friend says he acts like 15 year old. In a playful manner. False. Take that as a fact! The MC acts like a 13-15 year old ****. Someone who lacks the life experience of a 30. Which the MC claims to be. What makes it worse is that the MC knows about stores and games that have a fantasy setting but freaks out about everything. This is a wasted book with a very annoying MC.

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