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DogfishCatfish
DogfishCatfishLv103yr
2021-03-29 07:15

Its a pretty good story ngl. The only problem is the updating stability and the grammar. The grammar is pretty good, there are barely any mistakes. Overall I gove it a 10/10.

Reincarnated in another world with the Sans system [HIATUS]

Random_Entity
4.4

Liked it!

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DogfishCatfish
DogfishCatfishLv10

*give

3yr
Other Reviews
Random_Entity
Random_EntityAuthor

Reveal spoiler

3yr

Random_Entity
Random_EntityAuthor

Hey author here .-. Just here to say I’m probably not gonna be updating for a while... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

3yr
Omni404_Sans
Omni404_SansLv13

Hawe a Sansational day my friend [That pun costed you 1 chapter I am vaiting]

2yr
NoirRein
NoirReinLv3

I like the premises but you should mosT likely build the world up a little more and adding a power system seems right and just some more surroundings like where is he an kingdom? Whats the past behind the dungeons? Who is ruling said kingdom and what role do they play overall. Also add a tad bit more personality to Chase as he has had multiple sans experiences so him not being the sanest person but keeping it together would suit him. this is just a review so do what u want but ill read no matter what because sans.🪓

3yr
BRUH_TIME_TRIO
BRUH_TIME_TRIOLv1

B R U H . . . ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

3yr
WhiteWarlock
WhiteWarlockLv4

So far, its good, I dont know where the plot is going, but hey, screw plot! Were not here for that, were here to have fun reading a story which can go in any random direction. Anyway, its been good reading so far, and Im patiently waiting for more chapters whenever they get released.

3yr
DaoistLXKU4n
DaoistLXKU4nLv1

Me encanta tu historia, 😎👍💗 no puedo esperar para las próximas actualizaciones, me pregunto si terminará metiéndose con el X-event para joder a Ink y a XGaster.

2yr
thehater
thehaterLv2

oh god, the mc has a system and he's one of those murder hobo min-maxers who kills everybody for a scrap of xp and rewards.

3yr
Paradgrim
ParadgrimLv4

I wish you updated more, this was really good 😔 EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

3yr
Exodiathegod1
Exodiathegod1Lv4

really good story I want to have more come out soon.........................................................................................

3yr
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