Review Detail of NorthStar in Good Girl in Action

Thanks author for the story. 1. Firstly the choice and theme of this story is great imaginative and creative of two humans got entangled in their body swap. 2. Embeded values allows readers to learn as they e.g goodness drawn from this is KyLo and Vad managed to use their own lense to assess and deal / handle each other’s situation using their own thinking. So Vad coukd use his advantages and maturing to deal and solution for Kylo being victimise as a bully and Kylo apply her softer view into mending conflicts and situation that Vad had to deal with his best friend / buddies etc 3. character building done subtky through conversations allowing readers to understand their thoughts and how they will react to situations Keep up the good work author - look forward to see if Kylo can get to the bottom of the sea to unlock and return back their state as how Osca hinted. Great humour in between and choice of words!